Nerdology 101: High Stakes and Immortality
NERDSSSSS! Welcome back to Nerdology 101. As most of you probably know by now, I’m Maria Levato, indie author, blog writer, anime nerd, and all around weirdo. Recently, I’ve been working on a manuscript titled Harem of the Heavens (HOTH). HOTH deals with gods, naturally, and so I have had to deal a lot with this weeks topic. When writing a fantasy or romantasy, how do you balance immortal characters with high stakes? Are the stakes ever really high if the characters can’t die? The short answer: The stakes are absolutely high. Follow along and find out how it’s done (no, this will not contain spoilers for my unreleased book.). Let’s get into some nerdology!
Research the Pantheons
First and foremost, you’re going to want to research the pantheon your writing about. Immortality doesn’t always mean the same thing to every pantheon. The Greeks were pretty freakin’ immortal, the Norse just had long lifespans, the Egyptians were immortal but in a reincarnation sort of way, and the list goes on. Depending on what you’re writing about, your characters may very well be killable. If they aren’t, you might find established means of disempowerment that you can use.
Add Other Factors
Pose the question of if an eternity of misery or torment is truly any less high stakes then death? For example: A Greek could be immortal all day long, but after they saw what happened to the Titans, they could very well have a fear that certain actions will lead them into a similar situation. If eternal torment in Tartaros is the consequence that replaces death, most readers will probably view that as a worse outcome if you play the card well.
Beyond that specific example, other high stakes factors can be unfavorable marriages and disinfranchisement from the pantheon or family members.
An Uneven Playing Field
Maybe you just don’t? Maybe one character truly doesn’t have as much at stake as another. That’s realistic AND it intensifies things for the character with more at stake. An uneven playing field can lead to passionate arguements where the party with less skin in the game is made to realize how privileged they are when the party with more skin it opens up to them about what’s truly on the line. It’s a moment that can lead to intense character development for both party, the fearful one becoming more vulnerable with this other character and the powerful one becoming more attuned to the needs of others—or at least one other. It’s a nice contrast, when you think about it, to have one character doing this inconcievably terrifying stuff out of boredom and another who’s life is on the line. Use it.
The Life of a Loved One
Is your god in love with a mortal, or a god from another pantheon with a more flexible immortality? Then, there’s another option. If that lover is at risk of dying, the immortal one has enough reason to act. The fear and potential grief they could face would do well at keeping the story high stakes.
No lover? An immortal god who wants to protect their mortal worshipers serves the same purpose. If, for example, your issue is a war, a single god might not be able to protect their entire mortal following alone. That’s another type of love, but it’s equally effective at providing a high stakes motivation for the character.
These are, of course, just a few examples of outs you can use to circumvent immortality. The point is, this is CREATIVE writing. Be creative and your story will be better for it. I hope this post helps you get your juices flowing if this is something that has hemmed you up. Whatever happens, keep writing, keep reading, and keep being the nerd you are. That’s all for this segment of Nerdology 101. Check back again next Friday for another. Until then, have a nerdy week!
